I'm in a bit of a fluff mode and I've been finding it hard to stop drawing Bon and Victor being goddamned adorable. (We've been working on an alternate story of the guys in a modern setting, have we mentioned? Because we are silly, and also sappy as hell.)
Also, there was a thread in the freebie forum that said it was looking for pitches to do three page comic, so that got me thinking and I produced this little scenario. The intended joke falls a little flat, but I still like it.
[A car is sitting outside of a small suburban kind of house in a somewhat decent looking neighborhood; this is in the late 1930s or early 1940s. It is night. The house is the only source of light. in the foreground is the windshield of a car and ]
[Victor and Bon are sitting in the car, watching the house and resting respectively, obviously waiting.]
A: "I hate it when they make you wait out in the goddamn car for an age."
B:"What, like we ain't got nothing else to do but wait for this guy? We have to sit in here stewing until he decides it's time to go?"
C: "Mm." [ Bon is nonplussed, eyes closed, obviously trying to nap while they wait]
D: "S'just goddamned rude is all."
E: "That it is, cher."
F: " Finally." [ We can see someone leaving the house, its occupant waving goodbye.]
G:" Thought I was gonna die of old age before he left." [Vic reaches into his coat and Bon reaches down for something on the floorboard]
[Vic pulls out an automatic revolver and Bon is now holding a tommy gun]
Last panel bubble I forgot to include: "You wanna get some drinks at Muddy's after we waste this guy?" "Love to."
For panel 7 I'm not sure if the light source would go out, like they'd turned off the porch light, or if it'd get a little brighter, from the door being opened. By 9 it'd go back to the previous lighting, or darker.
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[Victor and Bon are sitting in the car, watching the house and resting respectively, obviously waiting.]
A: "I hate it when they make you wait out in the goddamn car for an age."
B:"What, like we ain't got nothing else to do but wait for this guy? We have to sit in here stewing until he decides it's time to go?"
C: "Mm." [ Bon is nonplussed, eyes closed, obviously trying to nap while they wait]
D: "S'just goddamned rude is all."
E: "That it is, cher."
F: " Finally." [ We can see someone leaving the house, its occupant waving goodbye.]
G:" Thought I was gonna die of old age before he left." [Vic reaches into his coat and Bon reaches down for something on the floorboard]
[Vic pulls out an automatic revolver and Bon is now holding a tommy gun]
Last panel bubble I forgot to include: "You wanna get some drinks at Muddy's after we waste this guy?" "Love to."
For panel 7 I'm not sure if the light source would go out, like they'd turned off the porch light, or if it'd get a little brighter, from the door being opened. By 9 it'd go back to the previous lighting, or darker.
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Might try and make it later, see if I can't get a good streamlined comic process going. It helps that I could totally cheat on the background here. :3c
And then Vic and Bon were fancy British gentlemen. Vic's in uniform, an Officer of the Light Foot apparently.
Winding up with a little set of waist-ups of the boys. Might be using these for a thing on Gaia later.
That's it for now. Probably gonna pop up a commission I've almost finished on here tomorrow.
And then Vic and Bon were fancy British gentlemen. Vic's in uniform, an Officer of the Light Foot apparently.
Winding up with a little set of waist-ups of the boys. Might be using these for a thing on Gaia later.
That's it for now. Probably gonna pop up a commission I've almost finished on here tomorrow.
It gets easier doing full pages the more you do them. Those thumbs are looking nice.
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